Defending the Faith: The Book of Mormon was very carefully written

By Daniel Peterson, For the Deseret News

Published: Thu, June 20, 2013, 5:00 a.m. MDT

 The Book of Mormon contains numerous examples of Intertextuality and probably quite a few remain to be discovered.

The Book of Mormon contains numerous examples of Intertextuality and probably quite a few remain to be discovered.

(, LDS Church)

“Intertextuality” is a word used to describe ways in which various texts refer to, or play off of, each other, often without explicitly indicating it. For example, a 2012 book titled “Seven Habits of Highly Fulfilled People” unmistakably alludes to Stephen Covey’s famous 1990 best-seller, “The 7 Habits of Highly Effective People.” Sometimes, authors hope that their audiences will keep the other text in mind.

The Book of Mormon contains numerous such examples, and probably quite a few remain to be discovered. John Welch has shown that legal language in the Book of Mormon tends to be highly consistent, perhaps indicating its dependence on underlying legal materials. Royal Skousen’s superb studies of the book’s textual history have established what he calls its “systematic nature”; its terminology and phrasing tend to be very consistent. I offer three non-legal examples first discussed by Professor Welch:

In Alma 36, Alma describes his conversion. At one point, he reports, “methought I saw, even as our father Lehi saw, God sitting upon his throne, surrounded with numberless concourses of angels, in the attitude of singing and praising their God” (36:22). Twenty-one of these words are quoted verbatim from 1 Nephi 1:8, where Lehi “thought he saw God sitting upon his throne, surrounded with numberless concourses of angels in the attitude of singing and praising their God.” These two passages are far apart. Yet, as Professor Welch points out, it’s “highly unlikely that Joseph Smith asked Oliver Cowdery to read back to him what he had translated earlier so that he could get the quote exactly the same. If that had happened, Oliver Cowdery would undoubtedly have questioned him and lost faith in the translation.”

Similar instances occur when, in Helaman 14:12, Samuel the Lamanite plainly quotes 21 words from King Benjamin (see Mosiah 3:8), and, very likely, when 3 Nephi 8:6-23, recounting the destruction in the New World at the crucifixion of Christ, mentions precisely the same natural phenomena prophesied by Zenos in 1 Nephi 19:11-12.

I would like to suggest two additional illustrations of Book of Mormon “intertextuality” that I, at least, don’t recall being mentioned anywhere else.

The first concerns Alma 29:1-2, in which Alma the Younger famously expresses his yearning to reach all humanity with the message of the gospel:

“O that I were an angel, and could have the wish of mine heart, that I might go forth and speak with the trump of God, with a voice to shake the earth, and cry repentance unto every people! Yea, I would declare unto every soul, as with the voice of thunder, repentance and the plan of redemption, that they should repent and come unto our God, that there might not be more sorrow upon all the face of the earth.”

Alma’s expression of his desire seems plainly based upon his own personal conversion experience, in which an angel appeared to him who “spake as it were with a voice of thunder, which caused the earth to shake,” and summoned him to repentance. “Doth not my voice shake the earth?” the angel asked, rhetorically. “He spake unto us, as it were the voice of thunder, and the whole earth did tremble beneath our feet” (see Mosiah 27:10-15; Alma 36:6-11).

The second proposed example suggests reliance upon the Old Testament story of Elijah, presumably available to the Nephites via the brass plates that Lehi brought with him from the Old World. (John Sorenson, incidentally, has suggested on other grounds that the brass plates originated in the northern kingdom of Israel, where Elijah lived and prophesied.)

In 1 Kings 19:11-12, we read of Elijah’s experience in the wilderness (perhaps in the Sinai) that “the Lord passed by, and a great and strong wind rent the mountains, and brake in pieces the rocks before the Lord; but the Lord was not in the wind: and after the wind an earthquake; but the Lord was not in the earthquake: And after the earthquake a fire; but the Lord was not in the fire: and after the fire a still small voice.” The Lord was “in” that “still small voice.”

The account of the destructions in 3 Nephi 8-11 tells of a great “storm,” “tempest,” “thunder” and “whirlwinds,” of fire and an earthquake that broke the rocks, ultimately followed by a “small voice” heralding the Savior’s appearance. Such literary crafting suggests that its author wanted us to think, while reading it, of the story of Elijah.

Daniel Peterson, professor of Islamic studies and Arabic, founded and edits MormonScholarsTestify.org and BYU's Middle Eastern Texts Initiative, chairs "Interpreter: A Journal of Mormon Scripture," blogs on Patheos.com, and speaks only for himself.

1. DRay
Roy, UT,
June 20, 2013

Proving the reality of the BoM, as the same "intertextuality" exists in our day, the same real world use of available text or scripture, including current Apostolic declarations, as well as proving God is the same, yesterday, today, tomorrow. Valid & Ponder-worthy article, thanks,

2. coltakashi
Richland, WA,
June 20, 2013

Anyone who has written articles for publication knows how difficult internal consistency can be. Composing an internally consistent narrative over 500 pages long without an outline or notes is inconceivable. For someone to do it who had never published a single essay, who was not trained in the tradition of literature, is incomprehensible. And nearly 200 years of examination have shown that the book is always more information rich than the society around it.

3. Mormon Wookiee
Riverton, UT,
June 20, 2013

Dan, I always look forward to your articles. I had never considered that Alma's desire to have the voice of an angel and shake the earth to repentance came from his own experience being shaken to repentance by an angel, but of course, that makes perfect sense. I love the Book of Mormon!

4. MrNirom1
Clatskanie, OR,
June 20, 2013

Now if we could only get the MesoAmerican theorist's to be as honest and forth coming. Lehi never saw MesoAmerica... but those who left on Hagoth's ships.. did.

5. GK Willington
Salt Lake City, UT,
June 20, 2013

per MrNirom1...

Oddity 1 of the BoM; Why journey down the Arabian Peninsula? Israel is right next to the Mediterranean.